Tuesday, September 24, 2013

Proofreading writing practice

T                last              A            C                                               win    today                                           today is the laste day of america's cup racing we all hope that we won it tody and bring the cup back
     NZ                                                                                                even                                  !  I          
 to NZealand. We have been watching the races and some of us have evn made signs saying go NZ? it
               exciting                            frustrating
has been excieing to watch but also frustrat sometimes.

Wednesday, September 18, 2013

Proofreading Writing Warmup


Max drived threw McDonald's  to get a cheeseburger be for the school disco He scoffed it down and got the

hiccups What would you order at McDonald's