As the recycling bins see the night they... come alive
They play games but they
have to find rubbish first because that’s their food. The lonely rubbish bin
had no rubbish because he was too little but it was nearly his birthday so he
will grow bigger. But then a boy accidently pushed the lonely little rubbish
bin down the hill. Luckily there was a gate but the bad thing was… that the
gate broke and so did he. The other
rubbish bins were worried because he was the youngest. People came at night to
fix his bruised broken body.
To Rico,
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I love how you have used some alliteration at the end by repeating the 'b' sound with bruised broken body. I also like how you have used the adjective 'lonely' to describe the rubbish bin. Next time I wonder if you could try and include a simile as well and maybe a few more adjectives.
From Mrs Head